Thoughts on DPS (Edits)

I think that my DPS looks quite professional at the moment but if I was to edit it then I would change the photography so that there is more room on the page for it and so that the hand of the model isn't blurred out because of the movement of her throwing leaves up. I think that I could have put little images elsewhere on the page and a few quote boxes to split up all the writing on the right hand side page. Overall I think that the DPS looks good as I have edited the images using picknik so that they are sharp and have borders around, but also so that they have text in of quotes etc. I think that this has helped my DPS be different from other magazines. I think that the DPS is well suited to the genre it is meant to be because the model is wearing the appropriate make-up but this isn't as well shown. To show this I think I should have done a close up of the model and used stereotypical poses. Furthermore I would have used little edits but I think that the DPS looks professional as it is.